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Organization:
Building On Evidence
The paragraph outline works best when the writer feels
sure of a line of argument and has mastered the reading. Sometimes, however, a
writer needs to write a draft or two in order to decide what her thesis is.
This is known as the "how-can-I-know - what-I-think- till
-I-see-what-I-say?" problem, and it often crops up when you confront
material which offers no easy answer. "Just how 'liberal' were college
students in the '60s?" "Does Charles Dickens portray all his child
characters in a sentimental manner?" "How revolutionary was the
recent Iranian revolution?" "What has and has not been changed by
the Civil Rights Act of 1964?"
Such questions ask you to look at the evidence from
more than one point of view: to keep questions alive in your mind while
writing, before emerging with conclusions, judgments, or definitions. You may
write much better about such questions if you focus on a selection of
specifics from the material (works of art, scenes, incidents, economic or
political changes, significant statistics, signs of the mites) and build the
whole paper out of "mini-papers," separate sections which take bits
of evidence and evaluate them.
If you don't know or can't decide at the beginning, for
example, how revolutionary was the Iranian revolution, you may want to look at
three or four examples of changed circumstances: the fate of political
moderates, changes in the lives of city dwellers, women, and students. With
each of these categories you may want to assemble materials, asking simply
"What do I need to refer to when I talk about this?" Building on
facts, you can then raise questions and answer them. Or if the answers are
ambiguous, the ambiguity may lead you to a more interesting conclusion than a
dead-certain approach might have done.
Writing a paper with this method is like measuring a
quantity of water by pouring it into several buckets. Since the whole argument
depends on how much goes into each bucket, each part will help you see,
figuratively, if the whole argument will hold water. If one bucket proves
leaky, then you'll have to scarp it, but that is not as discouraging as
redrafting an entire paper from the beginning. A solid "three-bucket
paper" might work better than a "four-bucket paper" with a hole
in it, which leaves the writer looking - you guessed it - all wet.
Using
The Paper Topic
Rough
Magic
Grocery
Lists
Up
Against The Wall
Paragraph
Outline
Building
On Evidence
Traditional
Outlines
Starting
With Last Paragraph
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